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Ez a blogbejegyzés korrepetálás.  Segítséget ad  Dsida Jenő A sötétség verse és József Attila Szép nyári este van című költeményének összehasonlításához.

A verseket feltétlenül el kell olvasni többször is, hogy értelmezni tudjuk.

Dsida Jenő A sötétség verse

Ó, virrasztások évszaka!                                                        
Vastagon fog a tinta, zordul.
A rozsdalevü éjszaka
már hatkor a kertekre csordul.
Reves fák nyirka folydogál
s te arra gondolsz: mennyi éved
van hátra még? Jaj meg-megáll a láb,
mert fél, hogy sírba téved.
Mondd, kissé mártottál-e már
hófehér cukrot barna lébe,
egy feketekávés pohár
keserű, nyirkos éjjelébe?
S figyelted-e: a sürü lé
mily biztosan, mily sunyi-resten
szivárog, kúszik fölfelé
a kristálytiszta kockatestben?
Így szivódik az éjszaka
beléd is, fölfelé eredve,
az éjszaka, a sír szaga
minden rostodba és eredbe,
mígnem egy lucskos, barna esten
az olvadásig itat át,
hogy édesítsd valamely isten
sötét keserű italát.

József Attila Szép nyári este van

Szép, nyári este van.

Vonatok dübörögve érkeznek, indulnak,

Gyárak ijedten vonítanak,

Kormos tetőket kormoz az este,

Rikkancs rikolt ívlámpák alatt,

Kocsik szaladgálnak összevissza,

Villamosok csengetnek nagy körmenetben,

Transzparensek ordítják, hogy: vak vagy,

Mellékuccákba ballagó falak

Visszalobogtatják a plakátot,

Előtted, mögötted, mindenfele - látod -

Plakátarcú emberek rohannak

És - látni - a nagy háztömbök mögött

Allelujázva-üvöltve-nyögve-káromkodva

Lihegve-hidegen-ravaszul-kapkodva

Emberlajtorján másznak magasra

Emberek

S a dühödt körutak nyakán

Kidagadnak az erek,

Hallani, hogy sikoltanak a néma hivatalnokok,

A hazatartó munkások lassú lépéseit,

Mintha öreg bölcsek lennének mindannyian,

Akiknek már semmi dolguk sincs a földön.

Hallani zsebtolvajok csuklóinak puha forgását

És odábbról csámcsogását egy parasztnak,

Aki szomszédja kaszálójából

Épp most nyúz le egy jó darabot.

Hallok mindent, aki hallgatok.

Kolduscsontokban nyöszörög a szú,

Körülszimatolnak asszonyok,

De én nagyon messziről jöttem

Kiűlök szíves küszöböm elé

És hallgatok.

Szép, nyári este van.

1924 nyara

A vers helye a költők életében: (bővíthetők az alábbiak)

Dsida: A verset 1936-ban írta – Az angyalok citeráján című kötetben-(1938) megjelenését nem élte meg,

 halála: 1938. június  7. ( 31 éves volt)

József Attila : 1924-ben írta(költészete a huszas években)

Közös:  mindketten fiatalon haltak meg. (J. A. 32 évesen) 

Dsida : szívbeteg volt .Szívbetegsége miatt elhatalmasodott rajta a félelem;(halálfélelem)

József Attila: pszichoterepautához  járt

Dsida A sötétség verse

A vers hangulata: mélabús, szomorú

Személyes hang: az ifjúság múlását, sőt! az emberi lét múlását („ mennyi éved van hátra még?”)

A vers szerkezete: impresszió ( benyomás)  a „ virrasztások évszakáról” , nem az évszakot mutatja be , hanem a halálra helyezi  hangsúlyt.

József Attila : a nagyváros képeinek elemeiről

tárgyias egyszerűség:   a feketekávé és a beledobott cukor kölcsönhatása egymással , mégsem idilli ,nyugodt kávézgatás

 hátborzongató érzést sugall--- ( zordul, nyirkos éjjel,  reves fák  nyirka, sír szaga)

  a vers allegória a halálról

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